Original:
Initially
in the work in the work, Marquez’s sympathetic tone depicts a gloomy
environment and the seemingly considerate people who inhabit it to to introduce an egocentric setting. In
the very beginning of the story, the narrator states that, “the world [has]
been sad since Tuesday. Sea and sky [are] a single ash-gray thing and the sands
of the beach... have become a stew of mud and rotten shellfish" (Marquez 327).
The degree of dreariness described in the depressing imagery of ash-gray sights
and rotten smells invites readers to feel compassion for the characters in the
work who must endure the dull environment. The tone calls for sympathy, and it
prefaces the susceptibility of the people to obsess over and expect miracles
that can potentially improve their lives. Next, when the main characters Pelayo
and Elisenda discover the angel in their courtyard, “they [do] not have the
heart to club him to death” (328), despite their neighbor’s in-put. The tone
present when describing the couple’s decision not to kill the angel praises the
characters as if sparing the lives of ethereal, godly figures is a commendable
feat. This exaggeration of compassion suggests that the people in “A Very Old
Man with Enormous Wings” think highly of themselves for doing little and that
they don’t typically practice empathy. The tone pities and praises the people
in the short story, indicating their self-serving tendencies and prefacing
their impractical expectations.
Revised:
Initially
in the work, Marquez’s sympathetic tone depicts a gloomy environment and the
seemingly considerate people who inhabit it to introduce an egocentric setting.
In the beginning of the story, the narrator states that “the world [has] been
sad since Tuesday. Sea and sky [are] a single ash-gray thing and the sands of
the beach... have become a stew of mud and rotten shellfish" (Marquez 327).
The degree of dreariness described in the depressing imagery of “ash-gray”
sights and “rotten” smells invites readers to feel compassion for the
characters who must endure the dull environment; the tone calls for sympathy
when the characters actually deserve none, and it prefaces the susceptibility
of the people to expect miracles that can potentially improve their lives. When
Pelayo and Elisenda discover the angel in their courtyard, “they [do] not have
the heart to club him to death” (328). The tone in this point of the story praises
the characters as if sparing the life of an ethereal, godly figure conveys great
benevolence; this exaggeration of compassion suggests that the people in “A
Very Old Man with Enormous Wings” think highly of themselves for doing little
and don’t typically practice empathy. The tone pities and praises the people in
the work, indicating their self-serving tendencies and prefacing their
impractical expectations.
Monday, October 28, 2013
Sunday, October 13, 2013
The Striking Aspects of Branagh's Portrayal of Hamlet
After watching Kenneth Branagh discuss his approach in portraying the fifth scene of the first act of Hamlet and then actually watching his portrayal, the aspects of the video that strike me the most include the lack of a role that Hamlet plays, the relationship between Hamlet and his late father, and the images of betrayal that Branagh decides to incorporate into the scene.
First, the camera never lingers on Hamlet, so it displays only seconds of his reaction to the ghost. However, we can see Hamlet in the video when he speaks; for example, when Hamlet says, "O, my prophetic soul! My uncle!" (1.5. 48) in response to his father revealing the identity of his murderer, we can see Hamlet's pain, confusion, and the realization of the confirmation of his suspicions regarding his uncle. I agree with Branagh that minimizing the role of Hamlet is the optimal way of conveying the scene because it allows audiences to interpret Hamlet's feelings more accurately than the actor can imply, and it draws attention away from Hamlet's pain to shine a spotlight on the ghost and the late King Hamlet's brutal and traitorous murder.
Next, in my opinion, the characters representing Hamlet and the ghost in the scene interact in a way that deserves attention. It is made clear from the beginning that their meeting is not a light-hearted reunion and that there will be no jubilant, slow-motion running into each other's arms. The late King Hamlet consistently looks down on Hamlet throughout the scene, especially when he commands, "Let not the royal bed of Denmark be/A couch for luxury and damnèd incest./But, howsomever thou pursues this act,/Taint not thy mind, nor let the soul contrive/Against thy mother aught" (1.5.89-93). In addition to looking down on Hamlet, the ghost makes obviously apparent and ominous eye contact with his son to imply the importance of the message he gives. At the end of the scene, when the ghost tells Hamlet to remember him and his message, they touch hands briefly. The looking down, the eye contact, and the touching of hands perhaps serve to convey the nature of father-son relationships and the respect that Hamlet perpetuates for his deceased father.
Finally, I believe that Branagh incorporates images of betrayal into the scene to convey why Hamlet must avenge his father. The scene cuts away to show Claudius and Gertrude joyfully playing a game together, and it later cuts away to show Claudius unlacing Gertrude's bodice; these images exist in the video to paint a picture of the ghost's message to inspire Hamlet to take action and get revenge. In addition, I think these images also validate the need for revenge to the audience because the members of which may have a hard time deciding the degree of Claudius' sins from simply hearing the ghost's words. The scene also shows the merciless murder of the late King Hamlet, which I believe exists to convey the same idea that Hamlet needs to take action.
In summation, I believe that Branagh has a great approach in portraying this particular scene in Hamlet because he really captures Hamlet's fear and the degree of the traitorous sins of Claudius.
Sunday, October 6, 2013
First Impression of Hamlet
In the second scene of the first act of Hamlet, Shakespeare introduces Hamlet, the protagonist of the play.
In his interactions with his uncle and mother, he appears noble, compassionate,
and in possession of a strong moral compass.
When Hamlet’s mother disapproves of his black, sorrowful
clothing, he describes mournful activities and then states, “These indeed
‘seem,’/For they are actions that a man might play;/But I have that within
which passes show,/These but the trappings and the suits of woe” (1.2.86-89).
He responds respectfully to maintain his nobility as prince, yet he also
expresses resentment by implying that his mother does not understand the grief
within him resulting from the death of his father. The subtle criticism toward
his mother reflects Hamlet’s integrity and his ability to maintain unbiased
opinions as an individual in a persuasive environment.
After everyone but Hamlet exits the scene, he reveals the
extent of his grief and his feelings toward his mother and uncle. First, he
comments on his outlook on life, “O, that this too, too sullied flesh would
melt,/Thaw, and resolve itself into a dew,/Or that the Everlasting had not
fixed/His canon ‘gainst self-slaughter” (1.2.133-136)! His inclination toward
suicide indicates the extreme degree of sorrow that the death of his father
inspires, and it leads me to believe that Hamlet possesses a compassion that
his mother and uncle seem to lack.
Hamlet continues his soliloquy, “Why she, even she/(O God, a
beast that wants discourse of reason/Would have mourned longer!), married with
my/uncle,/My father’s brother, but no more like my father/Than I to Hercules”
(1.2.153-158). When he speaks without anyone listening, he reveals his real
opinions toward his mother and uncle, and his opinions denote disapproval and
resentment. He claims that even a beast would spend more time mourning the
death of his father than his mother does, and then he compares his father with
his uncle and concludes that his father represents a hero of superhuman
strength and courage while his uncle represents an ordinary person. In my
opinion, these internal beliefs of Hamlet suggest the existence of a strong
moral compass because they imply his dissatisfaction with his family’s lack of
compassion and his desire to have a strong, courageous, and heroic king.
I believe that Hamlet is an honest and uncorrupt prince with
decent intentions. He does seem to harbor a lot of resentment toward his family
that could potentially manifest itself in an aggressive manner, but as of the
second scene of the first act, he makes an effort to conceal his feelings and
remain passive.
Thursday, October 3, 2013
Marquez's Tone in "A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings Proves the Harmful Nature of Big Expectations
Gabriel Marquez's tone that evolves
throughout "A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings" conveys the ultimately
detrimental effects of big expectations. The initially pitying tone of the work
expresses a dreary setting in which Marquez depicts
the people as compassionate, and the tone becomes judgmental when evaluating
the excessively poor condition of the unfortunate angel. The increasing cruelty
and artificiality of the people toward the angel, which Marquez expresses in a
somber voice, suggest that human nature and its extreme stereotypes and
expectations never allow for satisfaction or fulfillment. Marquez points out
through his pitying, judgmental, and somber tones that individuals have
unrealistic expectations and an insatiable desire for tangible results that can
only culminate in disappointment and blindness to the reality of given
circumstances.
Initially
in the work, a sympathetic tone depicts a gloomy environment and the seemingly considerate
people who inhabit it to introduce an egocentric setting. In the very beginning
of the story, the narrator states that, “the world [has] been sad since
Tuesday. Sea and sky [are] a single ash-gray thing and the sands of the
beach... have become a stew of mud and rotten shellfish" (Marquez 327).
The degree of dreariness described in the depressing imagery of ash-gray sights
and rotten smells invites readers to feel compassion for the characters in the
work who must endure the dull environment. The tone calls for sympathy, and it
prefaces the susceptibility of the people to obsess over and expect miracles
that can potentially improve their lives. Next, when the main characters Pelayo
and Elisenda discover the angel in their courtyard, “they [do] not have the
heart to club him to death” (328), despite their neighbor’s in-put. The tone
present when describing the couple’s decision not to kill the angel praises the
characters as if sparing the lives of ethereal, godly figures is a commendable
feat. This exaggeration of compassion suggests that the people in “A Very Old
Man with Enormous Wings” think highly of themselves for doing little and that
they don’t typically practice empathy. The tone pities and praises the people
in the short story, indicating their self-serving tendencies and prefacing
their impractical expectations.
While the tone is praiseful and
forgiving of the people, it becomes judgmental when regarding the pathetic
condition of the angel by emphasizing his imperfections and his features that
contrast those of a stereotypical angel, highlighting the ability of people to
apply unrealistic expectations to their realities. When Pelayo and Elisenda
first discover the angel, they believe that, “his pitiful condition of a
drenched great-grandfather [has] taken away any sense of grandeur he might have
had… That [is] how they [skip] over the inconvenience of the wings and quite
intelligently [conclude] that he [is] a lonely castaway.” (328). They believe that
the old man could not possibly be an angel and even allow themselves to overlook
his wildly inhuman wings because he does not meet the physical description of
an angel that they have in mind. The influence of the stereotype on the couple
illustrates their ability to find disappointment in miracles such as the
presence of angels. When the priest examines the old man, he notices unkempt
physical features and determines that, “nothing about him [measures] up to the
proud dignity of angels” (329). Marquez makes a statement through his critical
tone that not even priests can overcome artificiality and overlook physical
imperfections to appreciate the presence of an angel. The critical tone that
the narrator takes on to encompass the general opinions of the people in the
work implies the inability of people to see past stereotypes and the disappointment
that results from it.
Ultimately,
Marquez effectively conveys with his somber tone the tendency of human nature
to always want more and never achieve satisfaction. As people interested in the
angel try to observe him, “even the most merciful [throw] stones at him, trying
to get him to rise so they can see him standing” (330). The fact that even the
most merciful of people try hurting the angel for personal amusement suggests
that all people have a relentless dissatisfaction with the reality of given
circumstances; the solemn tone implies this truth matter-of-factly to suggest the
ability of people to justify hurting an angel with the lack of excitement in
its unexpected appearance and temperament. As Elisenda is chopping onions
toward the end of the work, she, “[lets] out a sigh of relief, for herself and
for [the angel] when she [sees] him pass over the last houses, holding himself
up” (332). Her sigh of relief
mostly pertains to her newfound freedom as a result of
the angel’s flying away and leaving her house at last; she could never find
satisfaction coexisting with the angel because he did not meet her
stereotypically romantic expectations of how an angel should look and act, and
the tone excludes remorse, illustrating the nature of people to shamelessly
judge others without applying the same degree of judgment to themselves. The
tone that retains solemnity toward the end of the work expresses a lack of
appreciation resulting from unrealistic standards.
In
conclusion, the evolution of tone in Marquez’s “A Very Old Man with Enormous
Wings” from sympathetic to critical to solemn makes the statement about human
nature that individuals build up too high of expectations, and as a result,
they can find fault and disappointment in miracles such as the presence of
angels. Perhaps Marquez means to suggest that we should not blind ourselves to
wonderful realities by forming extraordinary yet impractical ideals in our
minds. Instead, when we see an angel or its equivalent in magnificence, we must
appreciate it without comparing it to impossible standards. By not forming
impractical ideals or comparing reality to impossible standards, we can avoid
disappointment and appreciate things that deserve appreciation.
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